Richard Noggin and Brandi already have a few fans. I’m happy that readers found them likeable and well developed.
Richard is a bit of a klutz. Not seriously useless, but not quite as adept as I had originally planned for him. That’s how characters sometimes take over and write their own stories.
Having a name that translates into dickhead might have been the impetus for his development, but I really think developing Brandi and her skills had more to do with it. I wanted her to be feminine, but tough. She frequently had to come to Richard’s rescue in book one, so she sort of came into her own, leaving Richard to appear to be floundering a tad.
Richard is still a smart guy. The outline I have for book two gives Richard a much greater leading role and Brandi sort of takes a back seat.
But here’s the thing:
I don’t know if I like this. Brandi has earned her place and pushing her into the background on this one doesn’t seem right.
So, I’m skipping what I planned for book two and proceeding with book three. Book three has a more interesting plot, whereas book two has a plot that, IMHO, has been done to death.
Book two deals with development encroaching on the environment. A noble cause. However, I must have read variations to that story a hundred times. Maybe I’ll come back to it.
So I’m going with what I had planned for book three as book two. It’s more obscure and I think it will be more fun.
Confused little old people are missing all over the country, with a significant number missing in Florida. Richard and Brandi must find out who, when, where and how. There’s a common denominator.
I’m working on my victim profiles now. We’ll see how this unfolds.
Potential victims:
S.K. Nicholls 